| | The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] | |
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pocomouse

  Age : 28 Joined : 28 Nov 2006 Posts : 27 Location : An insignificant little blue-green planet far out in the unfashionable western arm of the galaxy
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Tue 20 Nov - 21:48 | |
| Still loving it, Miles! Wish I'd had a school like that. _________________ Agonizing is the pain of knowledge. Acknowledge my genius, and make it more bearable. - W.H.B. |
|  | | Anonymou Guest
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Wed 21 Nov - 9:42 | |
| Nice, but maybe alittle far from reality.
Don’t you think that even the nicest schools should have it own morons. Those who bullying and those whom bullying. If not for diperwearing, for something else. At my schoolage I’d changed lots of schools and had more or less comfortable terms. In some schools I was bullied (not for diaperwearing – no one knew) in others was bullied others or even I had bullied others. But everywhere it was. Maybe it’s kinda normal for this age.
Be waiting for more! |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Wed 21 Nov - 10:10 | |
| | Gir wrote: | | I don't get it, I thought the story was taking place in a human world where Slick was a furry. Yet it said there were actual lionesses right, Could you clear that up please? |
huh? It's a furry world, whatchu talking about? If you check back, I'm pretty sure I made Alicia(cat), the bullies(dogs), Slick(fox), Mr. Xavier(mouse), and probably some others I forgot about were all animals. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | Gir

   Age : 15 Joined : 07 Apr 2006 Posts : 148 Location : Oslo
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Fri 23 Nov - 15:51 | |
| | Ah, I guess I miss read. My bad, sorry. |
|  | | Shade

   Age : 17 Joined : 02 May 2007 Posts : 129 Location : Midwestern Oregon
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Wed 5 Dec - 20:02 | |
| Having caught up with the last two chapters, all I can say is KICKASS WORK, MILES!!!  _________________ "It's not the beauty of one's work that makes them an artist, but it's the heart and soul they used to make it." ~Myself |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Wed 5 Dec - 22:02 | |
| I should be able to post Chapter Six tomorrow sometime. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | Neptune_orca

 Joined : 16 Sep 2007 Posts : 31
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Fri 7 Dec - 19:30 | |
| Wow! I haven't checked in on this in a while, Great job! I can't wait! |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sat 8 Dec - 10:35 | |
| The Story of an Infantilist
CHAPTER SIX: The End of a School Year, The Start of a New Something
Six Months Later
It had been a glorious and joyful six months, me and Alicia had been the most happy we'd ever been in school. The school worked wonders. Neither of us are really that self-conscious about ourselves anymore and I just love the acceptance I can get from that school... that I have been getting from that school. We've made tons of new friends, including Rich, and we've been hanging out a lot with other people after school. We still had our old friends, too, don't get me wrong, but having friends with the same interests as yours and being able to talk about it whenever you want is so nice. Our graduation was last week...we were now officially out of high school(by the way, if you're wondering about our grades...I've explained I'm a nerd, straight A's, as for Alicia....she passed with no D's at the very least. She was more happy about that than me with my A's.) and we're going on to bigger things. But what? I thought, what are we moving on to? College? I didn't know what I was doing yet. Did Alicia? I had to ask. We were moving in together, I knew that. We both had good jobs with my dad in programming. I programmed in C++ and Perl, she was more or less a secretary due to her lack of the knowledge of the computer you had to have to have the job I have. Not that she wasn't smart, just not computer-smart. As for our pay? Well, being a programmer, and now that I'm 18, I had an official salary for an out-of-high school programmer(which still wasn't bad, $41,000/yr. (My dad was a CEO, of course I got better pay than most out-of-high schoolers)) and Alicia had a normal $11.00/hr. secretary job, which still wasn't that bad for just coming out of high school. We got an apartment to settle for now. We were happy living together, but we couldn't do this forever. “Alicia,” I said one night we were just sitting and thinking “Yeah, Slick? You wet?” “Uh...no, not yet.” She giggled, but I had to ask, “Do you have any plans for college or something else?” She thought for a moment, “Not really. Do you?” “Not really.” A pause for a moment. “Should we?” she asked. “I donno,” I replied, “I think so.” “Well, you know you have the grades and the know-how to get into a good college. As for me, community college will be good.” “Hey, don't say that. I'm not saying Ivy-League, but you can get into a good college too...” “Maybe.”
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The summer passed. Probably the best because I got to live with my girlfriend, and play the baby, and the caretaker, quite often. Our jobs? We loved them. Our friends? Hung out often...we even had a weird diaper party kinda thing with all the kids from the high school. Not weird in like a sexual way, or something else bad, just kinda never expected to do anything like it. It was cool though. Through the summer me and Alicia both applied for colleges around the area. I got into NC State, she got into NC Community College. She'll be going for two years there, and two years to NC State, because they wouldn't accept her for two years(no matter how much badgering I did). Rather than get a dorm room, I decided to keep our apartment and have myself take the long drive everyday(and her take the 5 minute drive down the damn street.). She offered to have me live at the dorm and she stay at the apartment to save gas and the long drive, but I settled for taking public transportation to solve that problem. $70 for a monthly bus pass is much better than refilling my car with $30 worth of gas every 5 days or so. Before we left for our respective first days of college, Alicia had to tell me something. “You might wanna ditch the diaper, Slick, we aren't going to high school any more, I don't think they'll accept you quite as well there.” “I..I don't think I can. Throughout the summer and from the six months of high school, I haven't stopped wearing diapers. I haven't stopped using them. I don't think I can control it anymore.” “You know, come to think of it, I don't know if I can either.” “Do you wanna wear one today, just to be safe, and if you can control it, then just hold it and go to the bathroom?” “Yeah, can you change me pwease?” “Sure.” I gave her a quick change and we both had to do a little experiment today. We said our goodbyes with hugs and kisses and I took the bus, while she took her car over to the community college. First class, Calc. II. (It stopped being trouble for me halfway through Calc. I.) first day in this college, I was the Freshman this time around. I didn't try to act tough or anything, I thought I'd just keep to myself until I can find out this control thing. I just idly paid attention to the opening lecture and the first day's lesson. Nothing out of the ordinary as for classroom procedure About halfway through that class I, albeit very subtle, I could feel the need to go, which means I had the ability to hold it. As long as I kept that sense of control, I could keep the control while still wearing whenever I wanted. I waited until after lecture to take off the diaper and relieve myself. * * *
After 4 lectures and lunch, I headed home to see Alicia crying(she only had three classes). “Alicia! What's wrong?” I asked “I...I couldn't keep control, Slick.” she said, sniffling in between words. I sat on the bed next to her and gave her a hug, “It's alright, it's alright, I couldn't either!” She sniffled again, “No offense Slick, but you're a bad lier. I'm your girlfriend, Slick, I know when you're not wearing a diaper. You obviously kept control.” “Well, if you want me to--” “No! I don't. I'll keep it mine. Besides, that means I'm a bit more baby-like now, doesn't it?” she said, tearing stopping, smiling dimly at me. “Heh, yeah, yeah I guess it does.” We hugged again, I gave her a kiss, a change, then we watched TV until we had to go to bed. Luckily, no work today.
-END Chapter Six
Next Chapter: WHAT A TWIST! _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down
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|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sat 8 Dec - 10:44 | |
| Miles Prower apologizes for the following:
-Short Chapter -Double Post -Taking so long to post when I said "tomorrow" on Wednesday -????? -PROFIT!
(apologies paid for in part by PBS, because we care.)
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Anyway, yeah, sorry for all that stuff, but the story's going to get all summed up soon. I appreciate all the comments thus far and I'm pretty sure the story's going to be closed either next chapter or the chapter preceding. Thanks for reading, everyone. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | pocomouse

  Age : 28 Joined : 28 Nov 2006 Posts : 27 Location : An insignificant little blue-green planet far out in the unfashionable western arm of the galaxy
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sun 9 Dec - 12:02 | |
| Pretty good, Miles. It seemed a little rushed, but I can see you're setting something up. _________________ Agonizing is the pain of knowledge. Acknowledge my genius, and make it more bearable. - W.H.B. |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sun 9 Dec - 12:35 | |
| | pocomouse wrote: | | Pretty good, Miles. It seemed a little rushed, but I can see you're setting something up. |
It could or could not be a trap. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | pocomouse

  Age : 28 Joined : 28 Nov 2006 Posts : 27 Location : An insignificant little blue-green planet far out in the unfashionable western arm of the galaxy
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sun 9 Dec - 13:31 | |
| | Quote: | | It could or could not be a trap. |
Eeep! *Hides in case it is a trap* _________________ Agonizing is the pain of knowledge. Acknowledge my genius, and make it more bearable. - W.H.B. |
|  | | Wyatt6159

   Age : 17 Joined : 18 Jul 2007 Posts : 916 Location : Tennessee
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 10 Dec - 1:20 | |
| I dont care if it was a short chapter, it's still exellent work and I hope to see more  _________________ MGS FTW!
| Spoiler: | | |  | ______
Status: Daddy
Brothers- Draco, Silverdrake19, Alexander Valentine, DDA
Sisters: Cherry Flower, Ahna Fox
Not decided between Father or Bro/Sis: RedFox, Simba, Kin, Ring Tailed Max |
|  | | Gir

   Age : 15 Joined : 07 Apr 2006 Posts : 148 Location : Oslo
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 10 Dec - 7:48 | |
| | This chapter seemed more like an epilouge because all you did was explain things. It makes me feel like the story is already over. |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 10 Dec - 13:47 | |
| | Gir wrote: | | This chapter seemed more like an epilouge because all you did was explain things. It makes me feel like the story is already over. |
Well, it kind of was an mid-story epilogue. It tied up all the loose ends before finishing the story, which I hope to do with quite a long chapter, explaining everything else. There will be a surprise at the end. (and an alternate ending.) _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
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