| | The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] | |
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funk

   Age : 22 Joined : 15 Oct 2006 Posts : 441 Location : teh Windsor
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sat 29 Dec - 13:12 | |
| I'm sorry to post this late offtopic. But on top of bullies aren't their good guys that get in the way at highschools? I've stopped quiet a few ppl from beating up others. Theirs gotta be some tall ppl with guts and intelligence to get in ppl's faces whoa re getting in other's faces? I knew others like me at the same highschool. So if my small school had a couple of us, surely a larger school could have atleast one or two good tough guys... no? Obviously would probably have to be seniors. _________________
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|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sat 12 Apr - 10:43 | |
| Hah! You thought I wouldn't finish it, but I did! Showed you guys! BAM! Now, note, this is the last chapter, and I didn't make it incredibly long, but it ends the story in a fashion I think you'll all like.
The Story of an Infantilist
CHAPTER SEVEN: The Wrap-Up Chapter
Alicia was having quite the trouble re-potty training herself, but after a few weeks, we got through it. We made sure to stay out of diapers in our respective colleges. At home, though, was another story. Ironically, just to check, we both went to sleep one night with dry diapers, and woke up wet. So, we both have a bedwetting problem. Well, I don't know if you'd call it a problem in our scenario, but nonetheless, it might be of concern if we were to stay the night with ...well, her parents. My father has always been cool with it. Our college years were wonderful though. We'd both come home from a long day of college classes and work, diaper each other, and then one of us would feed the other a bottle, or read a story to the other. We switched off frequently, but we always made sure to comfort each other if a problem should happen to either one of us. We were probably the weirdest couple growing up you'd ever seen, but the day Alicia got out of community college and was now going to the same as me, I finally got up the guts, that all my friends have been telling me to do. I was laying down on the oversized changing table we ordered special for ...well, our needs. As she lay the diaper under me, I said “Hey Alli...” in the cutest voice I could muster. “What's up baby?” she said in a half-caretaker, half-sexy way. The kind I always liked. “Could you take care of me tonight, I'm feeling a little stressed..” “Well...I donno, what're you going to do for me?” “I'll be extwa cute fow yew!” I gave her the big puppy dog eyes that she couldn't stand, whilst at the same time wagging my tail in an ever-so-cute fashion. She sighed, “Fine.” After the baby lotion, the powdering, and the snugly taping the diaper on me, I got up, and she changed me into a footed sleep, and right back down, on all fours this time, to go crawling all the way into the living room. She sat on the couch and patted her lap, signifying me to get up on it for her to feed me a baby bottle. I did just that after crawling on the floor in my sleeper in the most adorable way I could find to suit her. She giggled, “Oh Slick, you're so cute when your padded butt crinkles when you move around like that, come on now.” I smiled and got up the couch, lied down, and put my head resting on her lap. She then began feeding me the baby bottle full of warm milk and I just happily accepted it.(And as she teased, accepted it a bit too much as you could see a certain bulge through the diaper.) After she was done the milk, she asked if I wanted to go to bed. “Alright, but first, I gotta do something.” “Aww, I thought you were gonna be the baby tonight.” “Well, Alli, I'd love to be your baby forever.” I pulled a box out of a hidden compartment in the drawer next to the couch, “Alicia Richards,” I said, kneeling on the ground with one knee in a footed sleeper, looking up at the love of my life, both of us diapered, the anticipation clear in her eyes, and as I opened the box with the beautifully-gemmed ring upon it, I finally spouted the words, “Will you marry me?” “Oh my god!” she said, stunned, “Slick...” she began crying the happiest cry I've ever seen in my life. She took the ring out of the box and exclaimed, “Yes! Yes, of course I'll marry you!” I got up to what was, so far, the happiest moment of my life, and she gave me a long kiss that followed with me carrying her into the bedroom. “You'll be my baby too, then?” She sniffled, “Of course!” and smiled at me as I changer her into her footed sleeper and we slept side by side, kissing and crying in happiness, until we both fell asleep, awaiting tomorrow to when we tell all of our friends about it.
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Two years after being engaged to the best woman I've ever met, after we we've successfully graduated from college, we got married at the nearest church. It was a beautiful ceremony and everyone said we were absolutely perfect for each other. We left to our honeymoon in a beautiful hotel in Hawaii, the dream honeymoon to some, but to us, just an opportunity to be alone for some more playtime. We were the happiest we've ever been, and probably the most committed adult babies in the history of them. Even after getting jobs and going out into the real world, we still went home to bask in our babyish games and caretaking. I got a job at a law firm, while Alicia got one as an assistant manager of an accounting office. We both were getting paid enough to last us for a while. Of course, we weren't an absolutely perfect couple. We had our rough times, our differences...we weren't destined for absolute perfection, but we were pretty good together. I never thought I'd be able to find someone like this, but I guess this was my story. And to think...it all started because I liked to wear diapers. Truly, this is the story of an infantilist. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down
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|  | | ToastGhost

   Age : 16 Joined : 06 Sep 2007 Posts : 824 Location : NORTH Virginia
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sat 12 Apr - 16:58 | |
| | Hot damn! Two things I love, your stories and happy endings. I'm so glad you finished this one, Miles. Great work. |
|  | | Chrono

   Age : 16 Joined : 16 Dec 2007 Posts : 2678 Location : Beside Sunny
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Sun 13 Apr - 0:46 | |
| | ToastGhost wrote: | | Hot damn! Two things I love, your stories and happy endings. I'm so glad you finished this one, Miles. Great work. |
Toast, i second you completely. _________________ no tickleing ^,^" Please...?
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|  | | pocomouse

  Age : 28 Joined : 28 Nov 2006 Posts : 27 Location : An insignificant little blue-green planet far out in the unfashionable western arm of the galaxy
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 14 Apr - 17:32 | |
| OMFG! You finished it! Great story Miles.  _________________ Agonizing is the pain of knowledge. Acknowledge my genius, and make it more bearable. - W.H.B. |
|  | | Bluesy

   Age : 17 Joined : 01 Nov 2006 Posts : 1592 Location : In a Red House over yonder.
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 14 Apr - 17:57 | |
| *standing ovation* That is almost too awesome for words. That is a beautiful ending. _________________ If you know what my username used to be, please send me a private message with your guess. |
|  | | sleath
   Age : 16 Joined : 22 Sep 2007 Posts : 29
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Thu 26 Jun - 14:51 | |
| | I think you really, really rushed the ending. I enjoyed the story up until now. 2/5 |
|  | | Kin, the adorable fox

   Age : 17 Joined : 05 Mar 2007 Posts : 1063 Location : If you don't know,then there's no need for you to know
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Thu 26 Jun - 15:49 | |
| NECROPOST.
I AM THE NECROMANCER, NOT YOU!
Ahem. This hadn't been posted on since April...there wasn't much reason to continue posting, unless the author posted. Thank you. _________________ Stop looking into the ordinary, and start evolving into the extraordinary. - me, various well known people. ___________________________________________________
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|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Thu 26 Jun - 19:55 | |
| sleath: Although the ending was admittingly rushed, it wasn't so much so that it made a bad story, but, of course, it's your opinion. Out of curiosity though, just so I can learn a bit from what you said, why'd the entire story get a 2/5? Simply for the ending or something else? _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | gamer1150
 Joined : 24 Aug 2007 Posts : 7
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Tue 1 Jul - 22:55 | |
| | I just finished reading the story, and I really liked it. I thought you did a great job writing it. |
|  | | sleath
   Age : 16 Joined : 22 Sep 2007 Posts : 29
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Tue 15 Jul - 21:58 | |
| | I think everyting up until the endign was quite good, so yes jsut the ending. How a story ends/is wrapped up and concluded is equally important tome as how it unfolded in the first place. Though I'm not easy to impress |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Wed 16 Jul - 13:29 | |
| | sleath wrote: | | I think everyting up until the endign was quite good, so yes jsut the ending. How a story ends/is wrapped up and concluded is equally important tome as how it unfolded in the first place. Though I'm not easy to impress |
I'm sorry, no offense, but I'm having quite a hard time taking advice from someone with an opening sentence including "everyting," "endign," and "jsut".
I still don't understand the 2/5 for 1 chapter of the whole story, but w/e. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | sleath
   Age : 16 Joined : 22 Sep 2007 Posts : 29
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 21 Jul - 5:00 | |
| | Miles Prower wrote: | I'm sorry, no offense, but I'm having quite a hard time taking advice from someone with an opening sentence including "everyting," "endign," and "jsut".
I still don't understand the 2/5 for 1 chapter of the whole story, but w/e. |
Yes... Because that's relevant.... At all... Take your head out of your ass. Instead of worrying about my spelling, worry about your own. And don't rush endigns while you're at it. Don't bother responding... I quit this website -.- |
|  | | Miles Prower

   Age : 18 Joined : 03 Oct 2006 Posts : 578 Location : Millersville, MD
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 21 Jul - 10:28 | |
| | sleath wrote: | | Miles Prower wrote: | I'm sorry, no offense, but I'm having quite a hard time taking advice from someone with an opening sentence including "everyting," "endign," and "jsut".
I still don't understand the 2/5 for 1 chapter of the whole story, but w/e. |
Yes... Because that's relevant.... At all... Take your head out of your ass. Instead of worrying about my spelling, worry about your own. And don't rush endigns while you're at it. Don't bother responding... I quit this website -.- |
Really? I made someone quit? Cool. _________________
 --- Revolution, the only solution The armed response of an entire nation Revolution, the only solution We've taken all your shit now it's time for restitution The plan was mastered and called genocide Took all the children and then we died The few that remained were never found All in a system of down P.L.U.C.K. by System of a Down |
|  | | vincentthethird

   Age : 16 Joined : 06 Aug 2006 Posts : 647 Location : lafayette louisiana
 | Subject: Re: The Story of an Infantilist [Chapter (OMFG!!) SEVEN!][Fin] Mon 21 Jul - 12:03 | |
| | He'll be back... I laughed. |
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