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thesahara

   Age : 21 Joined : 04 Mar 2007 Posts : 56
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Mon 12 May - 10:49 | |
| | Wow I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the good work! |
|  | | pezman
Joined : 07 Nov 2006 Posts : 183
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Mon 12 May - 19:26 | |
| | BabyKuro wrote: | | What I meant was Naruto couldn't use his jutsu period. And since Naruto has to first use the Shadow Clone Jutsu in order to do most of his attacks he was out of luck. |
So basically you are saying a ninja can be incapacitated by having mittens stuck on him? Please. |
|  | | Chrono

   Age : 16 Joined : 16 Dec 2007 Posts : 2678 Location : Beside Sunny
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Mon 12 May - 21:14 | |
| yeah no hand signs, im suprised no one in the show thought of that _________________ no tickleing ^,^" Please...?
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|  | | ace_fox

   Age : 24 Joined : 06 Nov 2007 Posts : 19
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Mon 12 May - 21:17 | |
| omg what if the writers are reading the forum and decide that would be a interesting episode. orochimaru kidnapps naruto and embarreses him before doing away with the little boy.  |
|  | | BabyKuro

   Age : 18 Joined : 05 May 2008 Posts : 38
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Wed 14 May - 13:06 | |
| Sorry I've been away from here for the past few days. I've been busy cleaning and other chores around the house. (And watching the Penguins kick the crap out of the flyers. Sorry to any Philly fans!) There is a new chapter coming soon so be patient. Also to Pezman:
| pezman wrote: | | BabyKuro wrote: | | What I meant was Naruto couldn't use his jutsu period. And since Naruto has to first use the Shadow Clone Jutsu in order to do most of his attacks he was out of luck. |
So basically you are saying a ninja can be incapacitated by having mittens stuck on him? Please. |
Yes, they can. There are only a few people who can activate jutsu without handsigns and at the present moment Naruto isn't one of them. He could have gone into his one-tail form to make a rasengan without a Shadow Clone but that would have put Sakura at risk. Also, if you watched the Naruto movie you would know that Naruto has an amateur skill at best in the Escape Justu. So in other words Naruto was stuck. _________________
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Quote of the moment: "There is a price to be paid for being chosen. Because you come to realize very quickly that destiny is a fickle bitch." - Benjamin Linus "Lost" |
|  | | BabyKuro

   Age : 18 Joined : 05 May 2008 Posts : 38
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Wed 14 May - 19:07 | |
| Here's the next Chapter. Short? Yes. But it does explain Sakura's madness.
P.S. If you want to see a picture of my version of BabySakura check it out here under Kurizu.
---------------- Chapter 7: Punishment
'What am I supposed do to now?” Kakashi questioned as he paced back and forth. He had brought Naruto and Sakura inside and after cleaning there diapers had placed Naruto in the playpen were he was currently napping and Sakura in a high chair to get all the details out of her. Still, it didn't make sense to him. “Okay tell me again, what were you and Naruto trying to do?”
“Everyday, we train and strengthen our abilities,” She started. “So when you said you had the ability to relax our brains to the point of infancy, I began to think about all of the painful memories of Sasuke leaving, Naruto almost dieing, and some of my best friends getting hurt. It was so much but I knew that your mind relaxation technique would be able to seal away those memories and give me the ability to think without any worries.”
“So why did you have Naruto do the jutsu?” He asked again. “You told me that you memorized the jutsu hand signs. Why didn't you do it yourself?”
“I remembered that most sealing jutsus had to be done on another person,” she stated as she looked away from Kakashi. “I was certain that the jutsu was correct and when we got the chance, I sort of forced Naruto to use the jutsu.”
“What am I doing to do?” Kakashi restated as he sat down in the chair. He hadn't planned for anything like this to happen. He looked down at the sleeping Naruto and wondered how far gone he was. He began to worry that Naruto might not ever be able to regain his original persona. “I've got to think until then...” He let Sakura out of the chair and set her on the ground. “I want you to sit here and watch Naruto.”
“Yes, sensei,” Sakura replied as she looked over to Naruto.
Kakashi walked outside and sat on the decks patio swing. He rubbed his head as he continued to worry about Naruto.
“I need a medical ninja,” he thought as he pulled out a kunai knife and put a small slash in his thumb. He then did the appropriate hand signs and slapped his hand to the swing. “Summoning Jutsu!” A puff of smoke appeared and a small brown dog appeared out of it.
“Hey Kakashi,” the dog said as he sat down in front of Kakashi.
“Hey, Pakkun. I need you to deliver this scroll to Shizune and bring her back here immediately.” He stopped and looked back into the cabin. “Also, don't let the Fifth in on this and hurry.”
“I'm on it, Kakashi,” Pakkun replied as he took the scroll in his mouth and turned to walk away. “Um, Kakashi, if you don't mind me asking, why do you smell like baby powder?”
“Long story,” Kakashi said as Pakkun nodded and ran off into the forest. He sat back into the swing and slowly swung himself back and forth. “Now what to do about Sakura?” He thought as he looked backward into the house again.
Meanwhile...
Sakura continued to look on at the sleeping Naruto. She felt terrible and jealousy at the same time. Here she was sitting in a diaper and worrying even more than when she arrived and there laid Naruto, happily dreaming and not a care in the world. How she envied him and wanted the salvation that he had.
“What am I thinking!” Sakura exclaimed as she hit herself. “How can I be thinking about myself whenever Naruto's life is possibly on the line.”
“Am glade you think so passionately about the subject,” Kakashi said as he walked in. Looked over Naruto and repositioned the blanket over him before turning back to Sakura. “I sent for Shizune and she should be here soon.” Sakura turned white at that remark Kakashi noticed it and attempted to clam her down.
“Don't worry, I told Pakkun to just get Shizune. There is no need for Tsunade-sama to know about this right now.” He said as Sakura calmed down a bit. “Now, I believe that a punishment is in order.” At this he made hand signs and Sakura closed her eyes as she felt the chakra swirl around her. She opened her eyes and found that she had full use of her legs and feet again. “Stand up.”
Sakura did as she was told and watched as Kakashi removed the pink dress she was in and left her in a diaper and pink t-shirt.
“Until we get Naruto back to the way he normally is this is all you will wear. There are a few more pink shirts in your room.” He stated. “Also, Also, you will not eat from the high-chair, you will no longer sleep in a crib. I'm going to let you still wear diapers but there's now some rules about that. You will now have to change you own diapers.” He watched as each word seemed to dig into Sakura deeper and deeper. He walked over to the closet and pick up a box he handed the box to Sakura and motioned for her to open it. In side the box was about 20 pairs of extremely thick cloth diapers and 10 pairs of plastic diaper pants. “You will also wear these from now on two at a time. The plastic pants are big enough and you will wash them yourself. Do you understand?”
“Yes sensei,” she replied as she drooped her head.
“One last thing, You are now Naruto's nanny. If he needs anything it's your job to care for him. Now go upstairs and change yourself.” Sakura was taken back. She then looked down at her diapers and felt that they were full and even sagging a bit. “Did I mention that you have absolutely no control anymore? Silly me. Now go.”
Sakura left the nursery with the box in her hands and walked back upstairs. She continued to hang her head as she slowly entered the room. She looked around and noticed that the room was just as she left it. Her clothes were now gone though and all that remained was a stack of pink t-shirts, a changing mat, baby wipes and her leaf village headband.
“Looks like I'm in trouble,” she said as she laid out the changing mat and began to change herself. _________________
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Quote of the moment: "There is a price to be paid for being chosen. Because you come to realize very quickly that destiny is a fickle bitch." - Benjamin Linus "Lost" |
|  | | Jade07

   Age : 20 Joined : 09 Nov 2007 Posts : 372 Location : nowhere special
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Wed 14 May - 19:32 | |
| okay this is turning into a good story. i didn't want to say anything before cause i wasn't sure. but now i am. keep it up.  _________________ this is my farewell. wish me luck. see ya in two years -------------------- My FTT family: Shining Butterfly, Blackfirefox, Zeeb wolf and metalarms00 lil bro: threeinone http://www.myspace.com/mando_venku |
|  | | Chrono

   Age : 16 Joined : 16 Dec 2007 Posts : 2678 Location : Beside Sunny
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Wed 14 May - 21:55 | |
| yeah sakura is in trouble _________________ no tickleing ^,^" Please...?
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|  | | BabyKuro

   Age : 18 Joined : 05 May 2008 Posts : 38
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Sat 17 May - 19:00 | |
| Wow, this is offically the most chapter's I've ever written and posted to a site. (Yay Me!) Anyway here's Chapter 8. Gotta go watch the how now!
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Chapter 8: Shizune's Aid, Babysitter Sakura, and a Plan Revealed.
“Well?” Kakashi asked as he looked over a womans shoulder. She was only a year older than himself but she was the foremost leader in Medical Ninja skills behind the Nara Clan and the Fifth herself. She had black hair and eyes and she was also wearing her favorite steel colored shirts and pants. “Well, Shizune, how is he?” Shizune turned toward Kakashi after laying the infantile Naruto back down in his crib. She flipped a stray hair out of her eyes and with a serious look on his face. Kakashi's expression turned from worried to heartbroken. She then cracked a small smile.
“Naruto's fine,” she said as she walked over to a book that she placed on the floor earlier and began to ruffle through the pages. “Apparently, he ended up sealing his mind behind a mental block.”
“So Naruto's going to be okay?” Sakura said as she walked into the room. She teetered back and forth as she walked because of the massive double-diaper she now had to wear. She quickly moved to the side of the crib and looked in to see Naruto currently asleep in a bright orange sleeper. Sakura actually recognized the sleeper from the first night they slept in the cribs. She began to yearn for the crib and sleeper again but remembered that this was her punishment and if she even possibly wanted a night in her crib again she would have to do everything she was told. “Well?”
“Yeah, he's fine,” Shizune said as she stopped on a page and read through the instructions. “ I have just the thing to fix him up. Now this jutsu will release his mind and enable him to talk. As far as the rest of his body goes though, it's going to take a while to get his mobility back.”
“Don't worry we have a solution to that,” Kakashi said as he looked toward Sakura.
“Alright, here we go,” Shizune said as she activated the proper hand signs. “Release!” She yelled as Naruto's body jerked around a bit. Sakura wasn't paying attention however and was frightened to the point that she filled her diaper. Naruto's body glowed for a bit before his eyes flicked open. Kakashi, Shizune and Sakura then surrounded the crib and looked inside.
“Ugh, what's going on?” Naruto questioned as he tried to sit up but found himself unable to move his body limbs right. “Why can't I move?”
“Naruto!” Sakura cheered as she wrapped her hands around his body. “Sakura...can't ...breath...”
“Whoops,” She said as she released her dead grip.
“So, what's going on? Why can't I move?” Naruto asked again.
“Well, basically, the jutsu Sakura wanted you to do backfired and you ended up sealing your mind.” Shizune said as she began. “I was able to unlock your mind but you've been under the seal for about 3 days.”
“THREE DAYS!” Naruto yelled as he swung his hands in every which way. But with out the ability to control them, he ended up hitting his hands off of the bars of the crib. “OWW!”
“Naruto the best thing for you to do is relax,” Shizune said as she packed up her things. “It will be a while before your even back up on your feet, so I'll be staying a few extra days.”
“I'll show you to your room,” Kakashi said as he motioned for Shizune to follow. They both left leaving the two genin in the nursery alone. Sakura moved back over to the crib and brought the side down. She sat on the bed and then felt the mess squish up in her diaper. She had gotten used to it however and looked back toward Naruto who had finally figured out a way to sit up.
'Naruto, I'm so sorry,” Sakura said as she head her head in her hands. “I put you in unnecessary danger and should have never asked you to do the jutsu. It's just... It's just that I want it all to go away. The pain. The failures. Everything. I want so bad to escape it.” She began to cry in her hands as Naruto looked her over. Her pink belly shirt did nothing to cover the huge diaper between her legs and it was clearly soiled. He want to make her feel better but he couldn't come up with anything.
“Don't worry, Sakura,” The blond nin said as he willed his arm to move and pat her on the back. “Everything is going to be alright.” He then scrunched up his nose. Some really bad smell hit his face like a freight train. He thought it was Sakura at first but then after a quick wiggle found it to be coming from him. “Um, Sakura, can you go gt Kakashi?”
“Sorry, Naruto,” Sakura said as she wiped away her tears. “I'm your new babysitter. It's my punishment. So, let's get you cleaned up.”
“But, wait a min...HMMPH!” Naruto got out as a pacifier entered his mouth. He began to suck on it as Sakura strapped him down to the table and began to change his diaper.
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“So, how goes the plan?” a hooded figure asked as he looked from a throne like seat. He was currently over looking an assembly line that seemed to be producing some kind of robot.
“It goes well, boss-sama,” the man behind him replied as he looked over a clipboard. “Our resources tell us that this Uzumaki boy is at a beach house on the western seaboard.”
“Good, good,” the man said as he held a large sword in his hands. The sword was an emerald color and large enough to cleave a man in half. “That boy might have defeated both Zabuza and Raiga, and he might have even survived Kisame, but this boy will bend to my will.” He stood up and walked to the edge of the darkness. “I will avenge their deaths and defeats whether they would have wanted me to or not. Naruto Uzumaki, get ready for the strongest Hidden Mist Swordsman, Rio!”
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Quote of the moment: "There is a price to be paid for being chosen. Because you come to realize very quickly that destiny is a fickle bitch." - Benjamin Linus "Lost" |
|  | | Chrono

   Age : 16 Joined : 16 Dec 2007 Posts : 2678 Location : Beside Sunny
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Sat 17 May - 23:19 | |
| Sweet, this one nearly made me jump _________________ no tickleing ^,^" Please...?
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|  | | thesahara

   Age : 21 Joined : 04 Mar 2007 Posts : 56
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Sun 18 May - 0:30 | |
| | It is moving along quite nicely. I must applaud your stick-to-it attitude of releasing chapters so quickly. It has been a wonderful read so far. |
|  | | Sray

   Age : 15 Joined : 09 May 2008 Posts : 391 Location : Ocarina of time done, now on to Majora's Mask, damn wallmasters...
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Mon 19 May - 4:07 | |
| Sakura must eat alot of meat to keep messing herself like that, just a little observation i made there. anyways, i agree with the last guy that you putting new chapters out this fast adds to the entertaining storyline which makes it all the more enjoyable, so yay for you!  _________________ I just scanned this post with my sarcasm detector, the readings are off the charts!
Kuro: Let's begin to initiate my puuuuurfect plan. Usopp: Oh my god, you did not just tell a pun! |
|  | | BabyKuro

   Age : 18 Joined : 05 May 2008 Posts : 38
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Mon 19 May - 20:09 | |
| Thanks alot guys. The next chapter should be out by Thursday at the latest. I will probably get slow after that though because of my senior finals and my intro to video finals. If you want to see the stuff i haved worked on so far go to youtube and type in Kurox32 there's no AB/TB/Dl/Furry stuff on there but i'll be adding alot to it over the summer. Anyway, thanks again for making my first story a huge success so far.  _________________
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Quote of the moment: "There is a price to be paid for being chosen. Because you come to realize very quickly that destiny is a fickle bitch." - Benjamin Linus "Lost" |
|  | | BabyKuro

   Age : 18 Joined : 05 May 2008 Posts : 38
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Tue 20 May - 22:03 | |
| okay, I lied I got this chapter out two days early. Lucky thing too though because tomorrow I get to go to Kennywood again and the day after that I get to go to see the new Indy movie! Next chapter deadline is sunday night. For now enjoy this next chapter!
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Chapter 9: Sakura's Wish and a Dynamic Entry
“C'mon, Naruto! You can do it!” Sakura cheered on as Naruto teetered back and forth as he tried to walk across the room he was dressed in an orange onesie with the diaper clearly visible around the leg holes. Sakura had picked it out for him and she thought he looked super cute in it. Not as cute as Sasuke would look in them though. That was beside the point though in the passed day Naruto was able to regain much of the control in his arms and was now working on his legs. His forehead rippled with frustration as he willed himself to continue forward. “C'mon, Naruto! C'mon!”
“I'm trying!” Naruto replied as he brought his left foot off of the floor and tried to step forward. He teetered again but this time his balance was off and he tumbled to the ground in a heep. “Dammit!”
“That's okay,” Sakura said with a heavy sigh. She though that he would've had it for sure that time but alas, victory eludes them both. “Let's get you ready for bed.”
“Okay, Sakura-oneesan,” he replied as she picked him up and carried him to the guest bathroom on the ground floor. She set Naruto on her hip and knocked on the door first.
“Just a minute!” a woman's voice rang out as about thirty seconds later Shizune appeared wrapped in a towel. “Sorry guys.” She said as she looked over to Naruto. “And how are you doing?”
“Good,” Naruto replied as he gave her a thumbs up.
“Alright, it's all yours,” she said as she moved from the doorway and Sakura walked in with Naruto and closed the door.
“Okay then, let's get you bathed,” Sakura stated as she helped him out of the sleeper and tossed his wet diaper into a nearby trash bin. She helped him into the tub which she already filled with water and let him play for a bit before helping him wash his body. She let him get his private area's before a good rinse and and large towel wrapped around him. Sakura then carried him back to the nursery where she laid him down on the changing table and, after diapering him, put him in a blue sleeper. “All done.” She said as she laid him down in the crib she kissed him on the forehead and was about to leave the room when she head a voice come from the crib.
“Hey, Sakura?” Naruto asked as Sakura turned around.
“Yeah Naruto?” She replied.
“Thanks for taking care of me and being my big sister.” Naruto said as he put his pacifier in his mouth and began to suck on it.
“You welcome, Naruto,” she replied as she walked out of the room. It had just dawned on her that Naruto had no family to call his own. She remembered how tough it was for him to lose the only person he called a brother. She had never had to feel that pain . The pain of loneliness.
“Poor kid,” She said as she walked out onto the porch and sat on a beach chair. Kakashi had allowed her to sit outside now but she still had to wear the diapers. It wasn't a problem for her and she actually enjoyed sitting outside in nothing but a short t-shirt and extra-large cloth diapers. She also had learned to love the sunset and had started to sit outside and watch it every night. She then noticed something at the shore. She stood up to get a better view and noticed that it had the outline of a person.
“Oh no!” She said as she ran as fast as she could. The person was face down and bubble were emanating from his head. He tripped from the bulk of the diapers twice but it didn't stop her. She got to the man and flipped him over.
“Sir! Sir! Are you okay...OWWW!” She yelled as she felt something pierce the skin around her thigh. She pulled back from the man and found a needle stuck in her left leg. She felt a warmth running over her from the needle point to through her body. She fell onto her back and found herself unable to move. She then noticed a figure over her head. She playfully tried to slap at the man but found her arms unable to be controlled.
“Poor Sakura,” he said as he poked her nose. Her body giggled while her mind screamed at him. “What are you worried about? You finally get your chance to live your fantasy. No worries.” He said as he picked her up and began to carry her away.
“Not like this!!!” she screamed but all that came out was a loud wail. “Someone help me!”
“That's quite enough!” A voice yelled as two figures appeared at the edge of the forest. Both had a bowl cut haircut and big bushy eyebrows. They both also wore a green jumpsuit. They were similar in every way except that one was two feet shorter than the other. Sakura tuened her head to see who it was and immediately turned away.
“Out of any one who could've helped me, why these two!?” She screamed in her head.
“Who the hell are you two!” The man yelled as he put Sakura in a back carrier and confronted the two green clad ninja.
“You're looking at the 'Beautiful Green Wild Beast of Konoha' Gai Moto!” The tall one said.
“And the 'Power of Youth' Rock Lee!” The shorter one continued. He then noticed the pink haired, oversized, baby that the man was carrying. “Sakura? Is that you?”
“Uuuuu,” Sakura cried as she tried to look away.
“Are you sure that's her?” Gai asked as he seemed dumbfounded.
“100 percent positive,” Lee said as he got into a fighting stance. “I don't know what you did to her, but you won't get away with it!” Lee charged the man and hit him square in the stomach with a spinning kick. The man's body popped and a log appeared.
“Where did he go?” Gai questioned as he looked around. He then noticed the man already a far way off and a letter a attached to the log.
“Darn! He got away!” Lee yelled as Gai picked up the letter.
“What's going on?” Two people yelled as they ran up to the scene.
“Kakashi! Shizune! We've been looking for you after Shizune left the village in a rush with Pakkun,” Gai said as he handed the letter to Lee. “What happened to Sakura?”
“Yeah, she looked like an oversized infant,” Lee continued as he looked at the letter. “Huh? It's made out to Naruto.”
“Okay, I think we need to have a talk.” Kakashi said as they walked off to the beach house.
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|  | | ace_fox

   Age : 24 Joined : 06 Nov 2007 Posts : 19
 | Subject: Re: Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!! Wed 21 May - 16:20 | |
| | MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! I can't stand clifffhangers |
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