Kakashi's Relaxation Techinque: Final Chapter!!!

Age : 18 Joined : 05 May 2008 Posts : 38

My First Story! YAY! Very Happy

P.S. This is my first story in this genre so please be nice but, tell me what I need to improve on (Besides Character Development. I know I need to work on that. Also, I'm writing this on NotePad because I have to get office on the computer I'm writing and posting this story on.) Thanks!!

Summary: When Kakashi takes his two genin on a mission to help clear their minds of their past failures, he might just have to break out some forbidden jutsus to get them to relax.

Chapter 1: Special Mission

"Kakashi-sensei, can you please tell us where we are going?" Sakura questioned again as Team 7 continued to walk down the path. All the pink haired Kuniochi knew was that they were given this low rank mission to help them cope better with all the stress that both she and the blond haired, orange, shinobi next to her had built up after a few past failed missions and the loss of their teammate and friend, Sasuke.

"Now, Sakura, if I told you that it wouldn't be a surprise like I told you," Kakashi replied as he led the genin down the path. His silver hair blew in the breeze that had just picked up and he squinted the one eye not covered by his headband.

"Yeah, and we both know surprises are your specialty," Naruto stated as he remembered the team's first training mission as he rubbed his butt. "I still have the pain from that little surprise."

"Yes, well, anyway we're here," Kakashi said as the team moved out of the forest into the daylight. The three looked through the blazing sunlight and the two genin were in awe at what they saw.

"THE BEACH!!!" They both exclaimed as Kakashi chuckled.

"Told you it would be a surprise," Kakashi said. "Godaime told me that you two were having trouble so I took the liberty of renting that beach house over there for the week." He pointed to a small cottage about a hundred yards from where they were standing.

"This is so awesome!" Naruto yelled as he scouted the area. "It looks like a great place to train too."

"You're right, Naruto," Sakura agreed as she looked around as well. "The shifting tides and waves make the water great for chakra control and look," she pointed to some plants growing in the area. "There are plenty of medicine plants here."

"Don't forget the whole point of us being here is to relax," Kakashi said in a half-ordering, half-parenting tone. "Even relaxation is a type of training."

"Got ya, sensei," Naruto said as he looked again toward the beach house. "Hey, Sakura, last one to the house has to do clean up for the week!"

"No fair! You got a head start!" Sakura yelled as she raced after the orange streak.

"Like usual, this might be harder than I thought," Kakashi said to himself as he walked toward the team's home for the next week.

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So, what do ya think? The TB stuff will begin to come up if not next chapter then Chapter 3.

seems intersting post more.
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You had me at Kakashi's Relaxation.

With all due respect, this was way too short for me to form a true opinion of it.
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Sorry the first part was so short it was just to set up the characters and setting. It will get longer and more detailed as I go on. Sailor Scout promise. LOL.

Chapter 2: The Secret Door

"Looks like I win, Naruto," Sakura said as the dejected blond began to try and dig himself out of the sand. He was almost at the house when all of a sudden the sand shift causing his body to slide into the sand up to his waist. He had looked back and had found out that Sakura had used a chakra concentrated punch in order to shift the sand.

"No fair!" Naruto protested. "You cheated and used you chakra!"

"And you had a head start," Kakashi said as he lifted Naruto out of the sand. "So I believe as per the rules you have cleaning duty each night."

"Dammit," Naruto replied as he walked up to the house with Kakashi

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Team 7 stood ready outside of the beach house that they would call home for the next week. Naruto and Sakura were amazed at how big the home was in person.

"This place is huge!" Naruto said as they began to walk up the steps to the deck. "How did you get this place Sensei?"

"I know a few friends who use this place as a getaway after their ninja missions as well," Kakashi explained as he stuck the key in the door. Naruto and Sakura noticed that once the key was inside, chakra seemed to spread over the entirety of the door.

"Wow," Sakura meeked out in awe of the security system. "That must take some serious chakra control."

"You should have been here when they first began to install it," Kakashi chuckled as he opened the door. The three walked in and Sakura and Naruto's eyes began to shimmer. The foyer was a full two stories high and had a large stair case leading to the second floor. To the left was the living room complete with TV and Stereo System. To the right, the dining room was placed with a traditional low setting table and mats to sit on. There was also another room behind the dinning room which they both assumed was the kitchen.

"Alright, let's get set up and..." Kakashi was cut short though as Naruto raced up the stairs.

"I get the west facing room!" Naruto claimed while bounding up the stairs.

"No way, Naruto! I need my beauty rest!" Sakura complained while chasing after him.

"Well, I think they're getting the idea, at least," Kakashi sighed as he walked up the stairs after his two teammates beside this was his vacation too. He walked into the main room, which he was glad was left untouched, and began to set up some of his things. Normally, he didn't wear anything other than his black ninja suit and his Jonin jacket but he was on vacation so he bought a few new things like a few Hawaii-Style t-shirts, shorts, swimtrunks, and more open sandels. After he was finished packing, he heard a familiar loud bang. The same type when metal-meets-head.

"Is everything alright out here?" He asked as he peeked out the door down the hall. He noticed Naruto laid out on the floor with a large welt on his head and Sakura trying to hide a not so unvisible frying wok behind her back.

"No, sensei, we were just deciding who would get the west facing room," Sakura said with her best smile.

"Just don't debate to much," Kakashi replied. "The house has a deposit on it."

"Got ya, sensei," Sakura replied.

"Yeah, Kakashi. What she said," Naruto meeked out after raising his head and putting it back down.

Kakashi closed the door and heard one more loud, metal thud before a second door closing. "Note to self: Sakura's upgraded from pan to wok." He quickly finished the mental note before walking into the ajcent bathroom and beginning to clean up.

Meanwhile...

Sakura had finished setting up her room and so had Naruto (after regaining consiousness.) So they met in the living room to further explore the house. They had already explored the fully stocked kitchen and the balcony above the living room, but something didn't fit with the layout of the house.

"Hey, Sakura, do you get the feeling that something is missing in this house," Naruto questioned as they flipped through the channels and stopped on a soccer match between the Sand and Mist Villages.

"Yeah, I've gotten that vibe too," she responded as she set down the remote. She then looked around and noticed a handle on the wall behind the couch. "Hey, Naruto, check this out!" She exclaimed in a quiet whisper. He looked up from his position on the couch and saw the small handle as well.

"Well would you look at that," he said as he sat up. "What's behind door number one?" He questioned as he pulled on the handle.

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I think this is a good place to leave off. I finished this so you guy would have something more to read before I go to bed. Also, I might not get the next Chapter out till Saturday since I'm going to Kennywood tomorrow and then my schools prom is Friday. I will be pushing to get out Chapter 3 tomorrow though.

See ya soon!

ok im hooked ^^
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well I'm intrigued

awesome.
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3: The End Is Begun

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Sorry about the grammar problems, but like I said my downstairs computer doesn't have office on it yet and I'm trying to get the other writing program that was placed on this forum.

Anyway, here's Chapter 3.

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Chapter 3: Ultimatum

Naruto yanked at the door handle but it simply would not budge.

"What's with this door!" He yelled as he pulled.

"Um, because you have to move the couch," Sakura replied as Naruto sweat-dropped.

"I knew that," Naruto said as he hoped off the couch.

"Allow me," Sakura ordered as she cracked her knuckles before using her chakra to empower arms to lift the couch. She placed it downin the middle of the room before looking back as seeing Naruto staring at something on the wall. "What is it, Naruto?"

"Somethings written on the handle," He said as he squinted his eyes to view the words. "Junior's Room."

"Maybe their kid was a medial genius and keeps all his special herb that grow around here in their," Sakura gleamed as she thought about finding a notebook full of healing medicines.

"Or maybe he was a professor nin and keeps the scrolls of every jutsu he's ever created stashed up in there," Naruto said as he thought about creating a fireball with the Rasengan swirling at the center like an inferno.

"I can't wait!" Sakura exclaimed. "Let's do this, Naruto."

"Right!" Naruto agreed as the two grabbed the handle and began to pull. The hidden door seemed to materialize the more they pulled until the entire door was visible and was wide open.

They both peered into the room and found it to be pitch black. Sakura began to move into the room and began to scour the wall.

"Naruto, help me find a light switch," she ordered as the blond ninja followed into the darkness. They both moved into the room each looking over a different wall, until...

"Sakura! I found something!" Naruto cheered as he flipped the switch. They were blinded for a second as a light shown from above. When they regained sight, Naruto's mouth fell open and Sakura gave the biggest quizzical look she's made since finding out Kakashi wears two masks.

Before the two stood a nursery unlike either of them had ever seen. It had all the furnishings of a normal nursery: crib, playpen, high chair, changing table, colorful walls and of course, diapers. But there was one big difference, everything in this room was made for an adult. It began to remind Sakura of the story Alice in Wonderland because of the size.

"Well, this is interesting," Sakura broke the silence as she moved into the room. She looked over the changing table while Naruto opened a nearby closet revealing a ton of baby sleepers, onesies, and shortalls.

"This is kind of creepy," Naruto replied as he moved over to the crib.

"Having Fun?" A voice resonated making the two genin jump out of their skin. They both turned to see Kakashi leaning against a wall at the entrance of the nursery. He was now wearing a red Hawaiian t-shirt with a pair of tan shorts to go with it. "I see I can't leave you two alone for a few minutes."

"Um, Sensei, I thought you were a sleep?" Sakura questioned as the she tossed away the diaper she was holding.

"I was until you two set of the alarm in my room," He replied as he pointed to a long wire connected to the door.

"Um, so, what now?" Naruto questioned as thoughts of punishment in this room ran through his mind.

"Well, I'm officially going to use my major rule against you now," Kakashi said as he moved into the room. "If you don't relax this weekend and take sometime off, you'll find your self relaxing a lot more than you originally thought. Got it."

"Got it," the two genin replied.

"Now, there still seems to be about 3 hours of light left so why don't you two go take a swim." He said as he moved out of the door way. "And remember, if I find out about you training like you normally do you won't need anything from you suitcase for the rest of the week."

"Yes, sensei," They replied as they raced up the stairs to their rooms to change.

"Now, let's see, where was I?" Kakashi questioned as he stuck his hand in his pocket and pulled out his trademarked copy of Icha-Icha Paradise and sat down on the couch.

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This also might be a little bit shorter than the last chapter but anything more would have been mindless BS in my opinion and again sorry for any grammar mistakes.

Hmmm.... intriguing addition.
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This is a minor peeve: Why would Sakura have ever heard of Alice in Wonderland? They live in a different world...

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