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PostSubject: Amelia's capture   Fri 6 Aug - 10:42

Hey all, decided to post a Short-story here that I've had complete for awhile now. Just to make things clear, This story involves my Kaiju Girl, Amelia, who is based off Grand King Ghidorah. For those who do not know what Amelia looks like, This is what Amelia looks like. The story is rather Generic, the writings a little choppy (IMO.) So feel free to comment as such if ya all want. I hope you enjoy it all the same. Anyway, without further delay, here's the story in question.

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“You’ve got to be kidding me….”Amelia spoke with an annoyed growl, just as the sky began thundering and sprinkling small droplets of rain at a low rate. She sighed in disappointment at herself, having got caught in the beginning of a storm for the second time this month. This was a bit expected though, as she did stay out at the mall a bit longer than she normally would have. She would’ve left at her normal time had she not seen this exquisite pair of sparkling scarlet high heels that she had her eyes on for awhile go on Discount. She had to wade through an entire group of like-minded female to get to them though, but she was happy with her purchase.

“But I’m NOT happy with being in the rain!” She complained to herself, spreading her wings further out and increasing her flight speed to get home to Daikaiju Academy as soon as possible. However, the rain began to become more intense, and the blasts of lightning and thunder increasing in harshness. “Just great…” Amelia groaned in annoyance. She was going to have to make a quick landing somewhere for temporary shelter until the rain would subside. It was either that, or continue on and be possibly struck by lightning and ruin her dress and recent purchases.

She could take a bolt of lightning, but she’ll be damned if her dress gets ruined, Cecelia bought her this dress for her birthday!

Scanning the immediate area for an adequate place to stop by, Amelia doesn’t see any real place of interest. This district of the city was mostly just junk places like night clubs and low-grade grocery stores. Most of them were closed by this time anyway, so she couldn’t stop anywhere even if she wanted, except Night clubs, but she disliked those places, always being filled with creepy perverts and the like.

Soon though, she spots an odd sight. There was what looked like an old-looking Victorian-style house coming into view. It was a new-looking place, with a primarily purple color, and a rather nice looking garden. It stood apart from the buildings, and no one seemed to notice it. Shrugging this off, this would do until the storm passed. Amelia diverted off the course she was on, and made a bee-line for the front porch of the house. She saw that there were a few lights on, so there had to be someone home.

Landing on the porch of the house, Amelia proceeded to the doorway, brushing herself off of any water dripping over her body. There was something odd about this house, some sort of odd feeling that gave her a light shiver… But she wrote the shivering off as being cold from the rain. “Ok, be polite… You may wish to destroy this world, but that is no reason to abandon all forms of courtesy.” She spoke to herself, raising a hand and knocking on the door firmly. “Hello? Is anybody in there?” Amelia asked loud enough to be heard, but softly enough to not accidently roar.

“Hold on, I’ll be there in just a minute!” An elderly sounding voice replied back from inside the house, Amelia would also hear bells, but figured the sound was music or TV or something. The sound of something being unlocked would next be heard, and the door opened with a mild creak. In the door stood a woman a few inches or so taller than Amelia, she looks in her early 50’s, but sounded more like her early 40’s. Her hair was a slightly grayed brown color, and her eyes were also brown. She wore a basic sweater and a red long-dress, and slippers over her exposed feet. She smiled warmly to Amelia before asking: “Hello. Is there something I can help you with, Miss?”

Amelia almost felt a little light headed for some reason, why was she feeling like this? Before it was noticeable to the woman, she regained her stance, and looked the woman straight in the eye. “I apologize for bothering you, but if it’s OK, I’d like to….” She began, before being interrupted.

The woman notice how hard it was raining, and gained a concerned face, and even more so when she noticed Amelia’s damp clothes, Interrupting Amelia a bit… “Oh dear, you want to stay here for awhile until the rain dies down, right?” The woman asked a rather flustered Amelia.

“Hey, it’s rude to interrupt you know.” Amelia said with a sigh. ‘This woman’s got no manners… but at least she has the right idea, I guess.’ She thought in her head before answering back. “Yes, you’re pretty much right on the dot. I do hope it isn’t much trouble though.”

“Oh no, it’s no trouble at all! Come on in, you must be cold from the rain, sweetie.” The woman said as she gently took Amelia’s hand like a child and led her inside the house, closing the door behind Amelia afterwards. “Come now, let’s get those clothes of yours changed….” She told Amelia as she reached for Amelia’s chest to unbutton the dress, only to have her hand gently swatted away by Amelia. “Hm, what’s wrong?”

“I appreciate the sentiment, but I can change my own clothes. Besides, I don’t have any spare clothes with me, so I can’t change anyway.” Amelia informed the woman, a bit annoyed that said woman had just tried to undress her like a child.

“Nonsense, I have some spare clothes upstairs that could fit very well on you. They should be in the guest room. Feel free to use the bath as well. I’ll take these items of yours and put them safely to the side, you just give me that dress once you’re ready, and I’ll have it washed, Ok then?” The woman asked as she gestured to the stairs.

“Very well, I’ll give my dress to you to wash when I’m good and ready, however. I expect it to be waiting for me by the time I’m out of the bath. I apologize, but I don’t want to wear clothes that aren’t mine.” Amelia said as she began to walk up the stairs towards the Bathroom, a smile slowly appearing on the woman’s face.

“Don’t worry, I understand sweety.” She said as she began walking off to prepare the wash for Amelia’s clothes.

Upstairs, Amelia came into the bathroom, first door to the left after reaching the top. Upon entering, Amelia found it was a rather large bathroom. With a long counter with 2 sinks, a good sized bath tub with glass sliding doors and a shower. Hung on the racks were nice towels, obviously meant more for decoration than use. Luckily there were some normal towels to use, one of which Amelia grabbed and set on the counter for quick grabbing when she was done. Amelia sighed a bit as the thundering got worst, and began to undress. She took off the dress and neatly folded the wet item and placed it near the door, then did the same for her Bra and Panties, all scarlet red in color. “She can grab them at any time.” Amelia said to herself as she turned around and headed into the bath tub, turning on both the Hot and Cold knobs until the temp was right, poured in some bubble bath, and stepped inside.

“Amelia? Are your clothes ready?” The woman’s voice came in through the door as it slightly cracked open.

“Yes, they’re on the counter in front of you.” Amelia answered back as she closed the slide-glass doors that lined the outside of the tub.

“Ok then, I’ll have these cleaned right away, sweetie!” She grabbed the clothes, and walked out of the bathroom, closing the door behind her. She looked to the room clearly labeled “Guest room” and gave a small chuckle. “Oh, won’t she be surprised what’s in store for her. Hehe...” The woman giggled as she walked down the stairs.

Amelia laid back in the bath and relaxed as the lavender scented bubbles calmed her down considerably, making her feel more at ease in combination with the warm water. Amelia remained in the tub for a good 15 minutes, and loving every minute of it “Ahhh…. So very relaxing…” She sighed relaxingly as she let herself be lost in bliss.

Another 15 minutes later, the woman heard Amelia undoing the drain plug in the tub and draining the water. She had gotten just about everything ready for Amelia, and got her clothes into the Guest room. “Amelia? Your clothes are ready in the guest room. Go ahead in whenever you’re ready.”

“Sure thing, I guess.” Amelia replied with mild reluctance as she got up out of the tub, her body looking very clean and shiny with water still over her entirety. She grabbed a nearby large pink towel, and began to dry herself off with it, taking extra care with her wings and tail, watching out for her horns as she dried her hair. Once she was done, she folded her wings up and wrapped herself in the towel, and proceeded to undo open the door of the bathroom, peeking outside and looking down the hall, then spotted the room labeled “Guest Room.” Just a few feet down.

Keeping the towel firmly wrapped around her, she calmly proceeded down the hall and opened the door. Inside the room was dark, almost impossible to see anything at the moment. Stepping inside, she began fiddling around the walls for the light switch… Amelia noticed a strange smell in the room…. It smelled like a combination between scented wipes, baby powder and baby oil, although she immediately assumed it was a new air freshener fragrance. Before long though, Amelia began to feel very tired… Another smell donned to her nose… “What the….? Why am I so…. *yawn* tired….? Is… that…?” She said with another heavy yawn before falling flat on her front, fully asleep on the cushiony carpet.

In the doorway, the woman stood with a kind and loving smile, she giggled with delight as she looked down at Amelia. “Looks like she was very tired indeed… Well, can’t let her sleep in the nude, time for a change.” The woman said as she closed the door gently behind her.

Over 2 ½ hours later…

“Ugghh…. What the…? Oh my head…” Amelia spoke up with a heavy groan as she began to wake up, gripping her head a bit as she felt a headache coming on. Something was off though… she couldn’t sense what though.

“Just what happened? I feel like I got ran over by a planet rolling over another…” She said as she began to sit up, gaining her senses in full again. She wiped her eyes with her hands, but felt the first thing off here… Her hands were covered in something soft, puffy and cloth-like. “What the…?” Focusing her eyes a bit in the darkness of the room, a little light coming in from a nearby small light, Amelia would find that she was wearing a pair of puffy pink buckled mittens! “What the hell is going on here!?” Amelia shouted out.

Immediately she found more things were off. To her sides, she could see thick and tall bars, like a cage… but then she looked outside and at the bed itself… No… this was a Crib! A babies crib! There was even a Baby Mobile up over her head! Next she heard some thick plastic crinkling Amelia immediately pulled the covers off her body and gasped in horror as to what she saw next.

Over her whole body, Amelia found that she had on: A cute pink T-Shirt with a rainbow and cloud on the chest with her name written in black marker on the rainbow, a pair of big puffy booties, also with buckles on them, a pink collar with a somewhat large bell attached to it, and finally, MUCH to her surprise, a very big and thick babies diaper, clearly sized to fit her perfectly, it was even wrapped firmly around her tail. It spread her legs under its very thick and crinkly bulk. The diaper also has pink lining and tapes with teddy bears and other plush animals printed across her waist tape.

At this new development, Amelia screamed very loudly, nearly shattering the tempered-glass windows, donning a very bright blush across her face. “That witch! She did this to me! How dare she think she can just put me in diapers like she’s my mother! This is humiliating! Next time I see her I’ll---.” She said before something popped into existence and pushed into her mouth, silencing her immediately and causing her to gently suckle on it. She discovered soon that this was a pink pacifier shaped like a butterfly, with a large nipple (as she could feel) and a large ring on it. “Mmmph! Mrrrrph!” Amelia shouted behind the pacifier as she tried to pull it out, but her mitten-covered hands could get no grip on it, nor would it spit out.

“Enjoying your new clothes, my pretty hatchling?” Came in the woman’s voice, who, when Amelia looked to the door with anger, was much different than before… instead of a feeble old human woman, she saw a large purple dragon woman at least double her own size, dressed in what looked like a Victorian-style dress (Amelia could see the woman’s dress was not as puffy though.) with her long hair down. “I hope you are, but even if you're not, it won’t change a thing.” She laughed a bit as she watched Amelia try to stand up in the crib, her diaper crinkling very loudly and making the poor thing blush intensively.

“I suppose you're wondering why you’re in the Nursery, dressed like a 1 year old, am I right?” The dragon woman asked as she flipped on the light, revealing the room to be a large self-contained nursery, complete with pink plush floors, pastel paintings across the walls of meadows, playing animals and clouds with a smiling sun, a changing table fully stocked with all needed changing supplies, including Disposable diapers of varying thickness, and Cloth diapers, a Dresser, a Playpen, a Play area with a large baby blanket near a toy box, a small kitchen with a High Chair, and a small TV area, all lit by a Ceiling lamp.

“If you must know…. I’ve been looking for a little girl to take care of for a good long time now. My last children left home over a hundred years ago, and I’ve been feeling Empty Nest Syndrome lately… so as you can see, I’ve been waiting for someone like you to appear to me, and what luck!” The woman happily laughed a bit as she advanced into the room, watching as Amelia tried to rip her clothes off or bash her way out of the crib. “I’m afraid escape will not be possible, honey. Normally it’d be no sweat for you, but that collar of yours weakens your physical strength to that of a 5 year old, and seals away all your powers. This effectively eliminates any means of escape for you. The clothes you’re wearing are also magically enhanced, to prevent wear and tear of any type. They, along with the diaper, are also irremovable. Face it baby girl, you’re in here for good.”

At this, Amelia fumed more, but also made more attempts to escape, now kicking the side of her crib. As much as she resisted, this wasn’t going to stop, she realized, as she continued sucking on the pacifier in her mouth. “Mmmph!! MRRRGH!!!” She growled and groaned behind her pacifier, before being picked up by the woman, and held on her hip.

“Shhhhh…. It’s OK sweetie. I’ll take good care of you. I’ll change your diapers, I’ll give you baths, bottles to feed on, even play with you.” She said as she nosed Amelia lovingly, planting a kiss on the girls cheek. “Needless to say sweetie, you’re mine forever, as my Pretty Spoiled Princess.” The woman giggled happily more, cuddling Amelia close as she patted the Kaiju-girls puffy diaper-butt.

Amelia groaned and wiggled in the woman’s hold, trying fruitlessly to escape. She didn’t care that she was weakened; she refused to submit to this woman’s desires! She put a hand to her collar, and attempted to pull at it to get it off, but alas, it wouldn’t even budge! ‘Great, just great! I’m trapped…. As much as I HATE to admit this, I’m trapped in this humiliation…’ Amelia admitted to herself, looking down with defeat as she was next bounced in the woman’s arms, her padded diaper crinkling under her tail with each bounce. She shuddered the moment she heard the next part in this humiliation…

“Breakfast time, baby girl!” The woman announced with a happy sigh as she carried Amelia over to the kitchen, and locked her into the high chair… As Amelia watched the woman starting to make breakfast for her, she looked to the window, hoping with every fiber of her being that no one sees her like this…


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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Fri 6 Aug - 15:06

This is pretty good. I like some of the details. It's got enough detail to flow effortlessly and is a relatively quick read. (good thing too since it's a short story right?)
Is there any more? or is this the short story in completion? I feel that even perhaps a two day time frame to explain her life might be helpful in opening the story, right now it's kind of open-ended. How long is "for good"? Does she fight it every day, or does she eventually accept it or even like it?

The writing is a little choppy in some places, a couple details feel like they might have been missed, and transitioning in some places feels a little jumpy, but it's still good.
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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Fri 6 Aug - 15:20

That's about what I expected. Thanks for the input! Right now yes, this story is complete. I rarely have the motivation to write a Short Story much less a full-blown novel fic, but if anyone is interested in continuing or doing their own version, just consult me for Pics and a Bio and detailed description of Amelia's character.

But really, no, I have no interest in expanding it right now, and I don't know if I'll ever get that motivation again.

EDIT: And to anwer one of your questions, This is one of the many things Amelia will never accept, no matter how used to it she gets. So chances are, she'll fight it consistently, even if she does realize how fruitless it is.
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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Fri 6 Aug - 17:06

yes, I try and write stories, but they get too long, and I lose my focus and give up on them partway through. I understand writing stories and then losing your motivation, I've a bunch that start rather well I think, but then, I plan them too long and never finish them. If you have the same problem, then shortening it to this length might be a clue to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Sat 7 Aug - 7:10

'Your' is possessive, but 'you're' is a contraction for 'you are.' A 'creek' is a body of water, and a 'creak' is the sound that old doors make. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you should proofread a bit better.
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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Mon 9 Aug - 9:54

Thanks, Crystal. I Know what the differences are, but you are right that I should've proof-read it a bit more. Can't believe I let those mistakes slip by. >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Mon 9 Aug - 15:38

Aw, man. I thought this was gonna be about what actually happened to Amelia Earhart.
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PostSubject: Re: Amelia's capture   Mon 9 Aug - 15:39

RT wrote:
Aw, man. I thought this was gonna be about what actually happened to Amelia Earhart.
Aliens right?
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